雅思听力订旅馆的场景词汇（2022年雅思外教范文）

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爱吃辣的加拿大大叔雅思托福10多年一线教学中文说得还不错，头像是他家猫在这里分享他原创的雅思写作干货每篇范文都有配音，在同名公众号“英语考试Cat”

你好呀，我是来自加拿大的雅思外教Mac。今天，给大家带来一个【生活类话题】的雅思大作文真题的范文。

老规矩，以下是正文目录：

1，题目

2，审题

3，高分范文

4，范文朗读

5，范文地道词汇中英对照，包括：

题目改述
讨论观点类大作文高分句型
展示“词汇丰富度”的词汇&短语
展示“连贯与衔接”的词汇&句型

上题：

In many countries more and more people buy a wider range of household goods like televisions microwave ovens and rice cookers. Do you think this has more pros than cons?

审题：

Type: Discuss & Opinion 讨论观点 (我的观点：more pros)
Body 1: damage to the environment waste of resources
Body 2: brings greater convenience good for the economy
Key words: buy a wider range of this has more pros than cons

- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -

2022年雅思外教范文#12：家用电器越买越多，利弊是什么？（含音频）

▲范文音频戳这里▲

In many nations the increase in disposable income and burgeoning demands for a higher quality life have led to a growth in domestic appliances. This push towards increased convenience though it may damage the environment and can be seen as a waste of resources seems clear in my opinion to have brought more benefits than negatives.

One of the often-touted drawbacks of consumerism is the negative effect it has on the environment particularly in relation to non-durable goods such as home appliances. By possessing a variety of these appliances such as blenders and ovens for which have limited life-spans many of these machines will find themselves in dumps unrecycled and bleeding toxins into the surrounding natural environment. It is also commonly cited that by having so many choices and by having a supposed need for so many of these machines that we are squandering our natural resources simply for the pleasure of enjoying so called ‘home-conveniences’. In both cases however future technology will most likely help solve these issues.

In any case and despite such arguments it is without doubt that the benefits from owning these appliances can bring a plethora of positive benefits. One of the most important is that they provide people with convenience liberating regular citizens from laborious and trivial domestic chores. A simple example of this is the robotic floor sweeper which compared to the time before such a gadget allows one to maintain a clean home without the need to put time aside for cleaning and thus frees up the person to do other tasks. This demand for convenience also has a positive impact amongst others on the economy since as people’s expectations for a less arduous lifestyle increases so does the need for manufacturing output.

In conclusion although I believe there are potential drawbacks to the multitude of manufactured household goods on the market the problems associated with owning such devices will fade into obscurity once the advancement of technology makes them more environmentally friendly and so in the meantime I also believe the overriding boon they bring is greater.

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- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -

- (1) Introduction

Paraphrasing from the Statement/Question 题目改述:

In many countries = In many nations
more and more people buy a wider range of = the increase in disposable income and burgeoning demands
household goods = domestic appliances (televisions microwave ovens rice cookers etc)

Standard Phrase for the “Opinion” type essay 观点类大作文高分句型：